After playing your map through there were a few things that got to me. Firstly, greatly designed map,and I enjoyed playing it.
BUT, here are a few things that could be improved, I think the map is a bit short, takes like 15 minutes to play it through (could be cause you intend more followups, I don't know.)
And lastly, in the last part of the map when the watcher appears there is not really any other choice except taking the battle ships, now that your scripting stated that I should use either builder now that it is active or to take ships, so yeah fix up some space for watcher area.
I would really like that you made more though, you show some of the skills that is needed when making maps, however aswell I would like to see some more and improved parts when it comes to real camera animations, as these in my part takes a great role in the singleplayer view of bfme.
I really hope my wall of text wasn't too annoying for you.
Anyway good luck and thanks for the map, more would be appreciated ;)
powerofjustice File Author
Posted on 04/09/11 @ 03:42 PM
That's really good feedback, and I got lots of ideas to continue the story already, waiting for my new pc parts that will arrive on monday!
(atm Auto Save is messing with my worldbuilder all the time).
However are there anyone else who would like to share a thought or something to let me know I can keep this project alive.
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Posted on 04/18/11 @ 09:44 AM
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Posted on 04/28/11 @ 11:34 AM
Hi i really liked this map it felt like i was playing a very good campaig mission. u did a great job i enjoyed all the map :) keep on your work and maybe next time you can make this as a multiplayer map. Cheers ad as always have a nice day!
Lord Of Chaos201
Posted on 05/15/11 @ 05:01 PM
this was a brilliant map it was killer in its story line but lacking in length. i loved it you rock man a should thing of working for ea