Hey there, and welcome to the discussion thread of 'The Crystal of Supremacy', a story slash history depiction of Sira, Realm of the Flames. The story thread is I would like constructive criticism on my writing and the story. Of course, it's still a bit early to pass judgement on the story since I've only translated roughly 3-4 % of it (it was originally written in Swedish). Also, coming down on minor grammar errors is unwanted since I was never born an Englishman and will never be one either. However, if there's something you really don't understand, alert me and I'll do my best to explain it to you. Lastly, I have tons of additional material related to Sira which I probably won't post in the story thread, so if you want to know more about a certain people/event/legend, feel free to ask and I'll post some stuff in this thread.
[This message has been edited by oliver (edited 02-05-2007 @ 01:55 PM).]